Comments : A Reason To Try

  • 12 years ago

    by cac123

    I absolutley love this, i felt as if i were in the poem myself, and it really takes a good writer to do that you are amazing!!! hang in there
    as always 5/5
    **~~**

  • 12 years ago

    by pinkalias

    Beautiful, beautiful work.There were so many lines in this piece that I admired, some including the first stance which I must praise how you stated "And cradled it within my hate" displaying how you dealt with loss of faith, and "I waited alone with my broken heart
    And kissed away my last night"
    I really loved that image you portrayed, it was beautiful. I also loved the image you created with,
    "Looked up to the raining skies
    And let the rain strip me bare"
    And
    "And as the heavens began collapsing"

    This poem was dark and tragic yet displayed with a glimmer of insperation at the end. I loved the last stance,
    "She lifted me from the darkness
    And gave me wings so I could fly
    For the first time in my faded life
    An angel gave me reason enough;
    To try."
    Beautiful work, excellent job

  • 12 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Amazing piece...very inspirational! This piece took me on a journey of many emotions as I read it! Definitely one of your best....Holly

  • 12 years ago

    by Avellana

    I love the ending.

    Lv A,x

  • 10 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    The poem was flawless and beautiful. The flow was incredible and I just loved it.

    This part:
    And as I lost my grip on faith
    i would change to:
    --as I lost my grip on faith--

    I know you won't, but it just helped me to read it better when i placed it like that in my head. Other than that, you have an awesome poem on your hands. Well written.

    Great Vocabulary you have btw.

    5/5
    ~Stephen White