Comments : Pretending it's not real

  • 12 years ago

    by krystal

    this is a really great poem i can relate ican relate 2 alot of theese poems on here

  • 12 years ago

    by Amit

    ~ beautiful! v.v.nice, this one was amazing christina!
    ~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

  • 12 years ago

    by ღ.:Krissy:.ღ

    Amazing poem Christina! That was wonderful and amazing! I'll always be here for you if you ever need somebody to talk to. I know how you feel. I wuv you! <3

    ~Krissy

  • 12 years ago

    by Erica

    omg i love the poem its jus like what im goin thro now <3*

  • 12 years ago

    by SweetDreamer

    I really love this poem. You wrote it so well, and I especially like the stanza
    *This love is starting to hurt
    Pretending it's not real
    Trying to put it in the past
    Refusing to reveal*
    It's such a great ending to the poem and there's been so many time where I've felt like that about a guy. Nice work. If u have time, vote/comment on some of mine, thx!

  • 12 years ago

    by Dare Id

    Hey...this poem is too good and too realistic; you have been able to capture the reality that happens everyTIME,everyWHERE....Keep the good work...check my poems too

  • 12 years ago

    by Dare Id

    Hey...this poem is too good and too realistic; you have been able to capture the reality that happens everyTIME,everyWHERE....Keep the good work...check my poems too

  • 12 years ago

    by Ashley

    That poem really means alot to me, about a guy from work. We are suppose to be best friends but at times I'm not so sure, and yet I also have feelings for him but its like the more I try to hide it, the more it ends up showing...

  • 12 years ago

    by Melissa Aka Mimi♥

    excellent poem

  • 12 years ago

    by Donna

    i can completely relate to this poem. it is like u knew how i was feeling. i showed my feelings to my m8 n it turned out he felt de same. we av now bin goin out for 9 weeks. well done. also im new on dis site, so if u get chance cud u av a look at sum of my poems plz !!

  • 12 years ago

    by sinister

    i think this has happened to alot of us right. meeting someone, jus being friends and then one day things start to change. and it does hurt when the love isnt returned

  • 12 years ago

    by Red Charm

    Hey thats a good poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by Christina Gomes

    thanx everyone for voting means SOO much

  • 12 years ago

    by lindsey

    hey i like that poem i'm going through the same thing i wrote a poem about it 2..good poem

  • 12 years ago

    by gemma

    i like this babe!!! its really true!!!! take care n tell him itll be worth it i promise! i did n im so happy now!!!!!!!! xxxxxxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Rebecca

    Great poem! I know how ya feel.
    I loved it.

    Rebecca.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lexi

    Wow, this is a really beautiful poem... I can imagine what you're going through, and I know from experience that it's really hard... but you know what, if you're sure that you have a strong friendship, nothing can break it, not even telling him what you're feelingts are. It would feel so much better, trust me. Keep up the good work....-Lexi

  • 12 years ago

    by Danielle

    i really love this poem. i am feeling this way about a guy right now. thank you, you took the words right out of my mouth i so give it a 5!!!!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Fireflower

    wow.. that's a really great poem and i can realte to it alot. i hope u keep writing! ur a good poet!

    vedali

  • 12 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Pretty good! Not bad.. not bad at all... Please visit some of my poems!

    Have a nice day!