I really love this poem. You wrote it so well, and I especially like the stanza
*This love is starting to hurt
Pretending it's not real
Trying to put it in the past
Refusing to reveal*
It's such a great ending to the poem and there's been so many time where I've felt like that about a guy. Nice work. If u have time, vote/comment on some of mine, thx!
That poem really means alot to me, about a guy from work. We are suppose to be best friends but at times I'm not so sure, and yet I also have feelings for him but its like the more I try to hide it, the more it ends up showing...
i can completely relate to this poem. it is like u knew how i was feeling. i showed my feelings to my m8 n it turned out he felt de same. we av now bin goin out for 9 weeks. well done. also im new on dis site, so if u get chance cud u av a look at sum of my poems plz !!
Wow, this is a really beautiful poem... I can imagine what you're going through, and I know from experience that it's really hard... but you know what, if you're sure that you have a strong friendship, nothing can break it, not even telling him what you're feelingts are. It would feel so much better, trust me. Keep up the good work....-Lexi