Comments : He Smiled...

  • 19 years ago

    by Jeff

    I enjoyed reading this poem.It has a smooth touching story..I gave you 5.
    Jeff

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    Great description I think this was a rememberince poem am I right?

  • 18 years ago

    by dandy

    I love this poem; very original with a nice refreshing format. Presents a nice image Great job!

    ~dandy~

  • 18 years ago

    by SweetSuicide

    I took you addvice works really well...been writeing all day and i think im getting a bit better..thanks so much..*MUAH*

  • 18 years ago

    by Seth Rowley

    Why do you read it if your going to judge it the wrong way, i'm posting it because it's my views and i want you all to know my views, not because of the comments, i could careless about the comments, i just want you all to know where i am coming from but keep on with the comments sometimes it's good having comments, i'll work on not so much puncuation. god bless you, yesterday i was also in a bad tired mood when i wrote that

  • 18 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Excellent poem. The depth and flow of it was well-managed. Expressive and honest.
    -Kate

  • 18 years ago

    by Lonely Heart .ღ.

    Very sweet poem

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    The depth was good ... !! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    It was good. but i didnt really understand the concept of it. im sure it means alot to you tho.

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Wo wamazing your really good and i love your style 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    This poem made me think...I really don't know what to say...Full of emotion...Plz look at mine...Thanks and keep writting...

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Once again, very different and amusing. The content was spectacular and touching. You really have a great way with words. Keep it up! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaylee

    It's a really different poem and I don't know if I really got the meaning, your poems are always full of depth. Is it about the first man not being happy with himself but yet the man in tatters doesn't have much but is happy at what he does have? Either way your poems all seem to mean other than what we see on the surface and that is what makes them stand apart from the narrative ones on the site.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Nice original poem! it flowed well and it used good language! 5/5