lOVE IT! really beutifully written! :) 5/5

Great job Neo. Keep up the good work.

Ash

making the poems short means that your talent must be shortened.Great piece though try to make them longer i dont want to stop reading after 9 lines or so..

i really like this poem it was really good. please read and comment on my poems and i will continue to read yours.

Camryn

i liked it... good job

very good!! 5 stars for this one..! Please check out my poem.. it would be great if you have the time check out "My dad: dead and gone forever"
kisses =D

Very Unique- had to vote to make 100 votes! Congrats!!!
~Stevie~

Wow i love this poem... i hope it is about me lol! im kiddin c u on chat

lolac
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That was really good, keep it up, *thumbs up*., Amie

Omg thats so sweet

Great Job, and that poem that you read...was from ANOTHER Neha..lol...the 1 that u commented and wrote Interesting.....it WASN'T mine...lol
~Neha

Awsome i felt like dat befor dont tell no one lol its really good

Aww that was great well done .. i hope it was true it was soo sweet evn 4 a devil lol

Very sweet..kinda a poem on "the girl next door"