I LOVE this poem, special way of writing....It really spoke to my heart and it almost made me cry....Such a sad story, very well written!!! I loevd the twist in the end, never expected that a train would hit her....well, I'm almost speechless, great poem!!!

sort of an interesting ending but a good one none the less this is a VERY good poem keep it up

omg......that was amazing, i got the chills, and almost cried........it was very sad.......you are an amazing writer, keep it up!! 5/5 =)

wow...thats sooo sad...very good poem though....keep it up!

Wow your an excellent poet that is so sad i nearly cried.

omg, wow, awesome job on that....didnt' see the ending coming...toook me by surprise...awesome job..keep it up~ 5/5
*Brittany*

Oh..........my..........god............this is one of the most beautiful things i have ever read. definetly 5. your going in my favorites

that poem is amazing!

Shocking poem, seriously. But it didnt flow very good in sometimes, other than that it is great

I really liked the poem, I could imagine it. Keep writing! check out my poems sometime thanks!

Amanda Earl

Very sad poem almost brought tears to my eyes. But it was a great poem!

i liked it . i have a poem with a similar title

grt poem nearly made me cry :'(
always smile
peaceee

i like it that is a very good poem

you are a good wrighter keep it up

I Didn't Know Whether To Laugh Or Cry, So I Did Both Great Job 5.0 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Whoa...that ending came out of nowhere! This is such a brilliant poem! I mean the entire piece was so intense, it had me on the edge of my seat! Well done....5/5~Holly

That is such a good poem and i wish i could write good ones like that i hope you could write more and maybe even comment on some of mine. even though some might be dumb.maybe one day we can talk but plz e-mail me at caliz_chicka@yahoo.com thanks bye

omg!!! this is amazing!!! a tear jerker!!! great job! :)

the train bit was really unexpected..lol..but um..thats really good man..u really..kind of like..i bet every reader wud b picturing everytin u say in that poem..so yea...nice work..
- anasha .xoxo