The thought of your death, is more then I can take

by Daniel Goding   Mar 21, 2005


You say you love me
You say all is fine
But how can that be
When all you do is cry
It tears me apart inside
To see you harm yourself
Then try to hide.

I want us to be together
For our love to be true
But its hard to when drinking,
Cutting yourself is all you do.

I wish I could see things
The way you do
I wish you would open up
And speak to me so
So I could make sure
You never harm yourself anymore
And give you the backbone
You've been searching for.

I want to hold you close
Comfort you
And know when you leave my arms
You truly will be fine
For without you Id be but a line
On anothers sad rhyme.

Id never take my life
Without proper reason
But if you were to die
That'd be enough to try
For Without you Id be but a line
On anothers sad rhyme.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem. I really liked the last stanza because that is how much I used to care about someone. I love this poem. Please keep writting. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by TeAr dROp

    I like this poem it make me think about my old friend!!! keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by StephanieMichelle

    this is a good poem!plz read my poem never!!!!thanx!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    I truely enjoyed this... your poem had a way of pulling me, I didnt want to stop...Great work...Xox Sherrie

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Good poem but in a few places the flow was choppy and it didn't hold my attention in certain parts.....those two i think you need to work on but other then that it was pretty good!! Keep writing!