Stronger

by shenoa   Mar 22, 2005


I couldn't resist the urge to cut
i couldn't deny these feelings of what
i couldn't fight this burning rage
thats written down on this very page

i couldn't deny the blood i seep
i couldn't deny the tears i weep
i couldn't resist that lonely blade
that seem to cure the mistakes I've made

i couldn't deny the voices spoke
i couldn't resist the urge to choke
i couldn't deny that single pill
one that could so easily kill

i couldn't resist these tears i cry
i couldn't resist the urge to die
i couldn't resist the drugs i took
i couldn't bare that judging look

your stronger than me

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sad But True

    Couldn't deny the blood i seep
    i couldn't deny the tears i weep
    i couldn't resist that lonely blade
    that seem to cure the mistakes I've made

    This stanza is brilliant, your poetry are so close to emotions I feel and write about. Great work. Keep it up. 5/5, Im now your number one SAD BUT TRUE Fan!

  • 18 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    wow, that poem is so powerful. Nice write. Absolutely loved it. >3jess

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetically Speaking

    i couldn't deny the voices spoke
    i couldn't resist the urge to choke
    i couldn't deny that single pill
    one that could so easily kill

    thats sooo sad, I'm sorry to hear that. I wish you were happy, if theres anything I can do! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by R F

    Ohhh ! no one is Stronger than
    you Stronger ! ; )

    perfect endings,way to go mate
    Five/five

    Peace
    Rua Francis.

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    great poem!

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