Comments : Retrospection

  • 12 years ago

    by Andrea

    i'm not for sure what your usual writing style is but this poem is written well. great work!

  • 12 years ago

    by Kaitlin Kristina

    Bob, you just made my day. That means so much to me.

  • 12 years ago

    by Bret Higgins

    Thought provoking stuff there K.

    Bob says all you need to know.

  • 12 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    The segmentation works well; underscores admirably the confliction present in your words. Likewise, I enjoy the images scattered about. Truthfully, the complete effect reminds me of a mirror shattered in darkness broken only perhaps by a shaft of moonlight through an open window; enough light to gently set to glow each shard. Beautiful poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by Kaitlin Kristina

    Beautiful discription, I respect your opinion highly, so this, likewise to Mr. Shanks and Brets opinions, means a lot to me.

  • 12 years ago

    by Madga

    Wow. Beautiful poem. I'm lost at words here, good job. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Heathergirl

    WOW... I REALLY LIKED THIS POEM, WELL I LIKE ALL OF YOUR WORK . YOU ARE REALLY TALENTED!!! 5/5.....

    COULD YOU VOTE OR COMMENT ON SOME OF MY POEMS IT WOULD REALLY MEAN A LOT TO ME...
    MUCH LOVE
    ~*~HEATHER~*~

  • 12 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    the rhythym is constant. good job

  • 12 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    Once again powerful and poignant. As it is you're an incredible poetess in a variety of styles--I can't imagine how amazing you'll be as your lifetime progresses!

  • 12 years ago

    by Clown

    Stunning, remarkible, suburb even, Disturbing to read, but amazingly so. I loved it. Poe would have been proud. you are an amazing poet. i have yet to read your other poems, but after this, i think ill cheak them out

  • i really liket his poem .....don't change it its good how it is

  • 12 years ago

    by Johnny Mac

    I mean amazing words girlfriend

  • 12 years ago

    by Kaitlin Kristina

    Ya'll are so sweet to me *blush*

    Thank you :)

  • 12 years ago

    by No Motiv?

    the form of this poem is absolutely brilliant. It's different, but it works! Very, very good job. 5/5.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lithium

    yes i agreee it is different but i love it!
    its a different style but of fabulous writting well done! luv sam xox

  • 12 years ago

    by Kaitlin Kristina

    Thank you for being honest, JPM. I can always count on you for that.

  • 12 years ago

    by Gemma Sinead Hayward

    Very good, the ryhmes were a little hard to pick up, but i liked that because the ryhmings subtle and does not restrict the poetry. Exceeeelante!

  • 12 years ago

    by Carrie Aguilar

    To make this poem better I would say to not try to make it sound so good but put some of your feelings into it. When I read this I feel nothing

  • 12 years ago

    by Kaitlin Kristina

    I see what you mean, Carrie, but it was meant to be that way, it's about repressed emotion to a certain extent, so it's not supposed to make people feel as much as they think.

    Thank you :)

  • 12 years ago

    by deadnalone

    stunning

    ellie
    x