The segmentation works well; underscores admirably the confliction present in your words. Likewise, I enjoy the images scattered about. Truthfully, the complete effect reminds me of a mirror shattered in darkness broken only perhaps by a shaft of moonlight through an open window; enough light to gently set to glow each shard. Beautiful poem.
Once again powerful and poignant. As it is you're an incredible poetess in a variety of styles--I can't imagine how amazing you'll be as your lifetime progresses!
13 years ago
Stunning, remarkible, suburb even, Disturbing to read, but amazingly so. I loved it. Poe would have been proud. you are an amazing poet. i have yet to read your other poems, but after this, i think ill cheak them out