Hey that was really good it reminded me over one of my ex boyfriends because he had a girlfriend when i met him and he talked to me more than he talked to her and he would lie to her and tell her he was going somewhere and then come and see me and in the end I ended up the girl that he was lying to, to go and meet up with someone else... WELL Keep writing 5/5 Love Always Heather08

I LOVE YOUR STUFF THE POEM IS AWESOME CHECK OUT SOME OF MINE LISA MOOK
KEEP IT UP
LISA

that was good and hopefully u got the man u wanted keep it up 5/5 check sum of mine out

dat was gr8 luvd the rhymin 5/5 fanx 4 commentin on mine x x x

i love this poem but i have one tiny suggestion instead of havin under the ... have beneath it makes it sound better u dont have to its just a suggestion and yea ive heard some of the ones i have before but i have made slight changes to them makin them better in my eyes and i just like them so thatnx
later lis

that was realllly good....god job