Karma

by tiffany   Mar 24, 2005


You shattered my heart
and stomped on the broken pieces
I told you I loved you
You replied"I don't care, the feelings just aren't there."

I still called repeatedly, you rejected me
You answered and told me to stop i was pushing you away.
So I didn't call and neither did you.
Two years of memories we threw away.

So i sat in my room and thought why do i love you?
Your right i wasn't meant for you:
I deserve someone to hold me the way i held you,
someone to want me not push me to the side,
someone who deserves my love
that's certainly not you

So when you call and tell me how I shattered your heart and stomped on the broken pieces
Ill tell you, "I Don't Care, The Feelings Just Aren't There!"

its not good but just how i feel!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Megadrive

    I liked it I thought it was beautiful! Hmm... Some advise... I suggest more commas and periods lol. They will give your poem a rhythm, make words more powerful, and get the reader more into it. And periods just help tell the reader when a sentence is over. And of course just make the poem look nicer to=D other then that great job!

    ~Megan~

  • 19 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    It's good and if it's how you feel it's even better because it's emotonal and moving! I liked it because i'm going through a similar thing now and as for the last verse i only have one thing to say, "YoU gO gIrL" lol but it's true that what goes around comes around and he got what he deserved. Anyways keep it up:)
    Tash
    xoxox