wow! excellent poem, i love the flow and everything!

Wow, this poem is fantastic. I love the short, rhyming lines. They flowed so well. Great job hun!

Love,
Tiff

Another amazing poem so well written sad but so well done! Take Care!

Woow.....so deep and sad!!! Extremely well written!! Great job!

~Sierra

I like it very much, amazing how with just a few words in each sentence y ou manage to write a masterpiece.

Really nice flow of words, I'm going to add you to my favorites, because I want to read more of your work! Awesome job, keep it up!

aww thanks! your already on mine idk if already told you that or not...?

WOW!!!!!! My goodness I love this poem!! I'm going to add you to my favorites and read more of your stuff! Great poem! 5/5!! You explain feelings so vividly in so few words! Great job and keep it up!

much love
savannah

hey again i like this poem and i like mostly all u other to really like ythis one and the other i wrote this comment well hope u keep me in touch with some of ur newest poems

hey again i like this poem and i like mostly all u other to really like ythis one and the other i wrote this comment well hope u keep me in touch with some of ur newest poems

hey again i like this poem and i like mostly all u other to really like ythis one and the other i wrote this comment well hope u keep me in touch with some of ur newest poems

Wow. That's a great poem. It sounds like it could be a song or something of that nature. (Well to me at least) Well done, well done.

Good POEM!

it's so great and i can relate to it..well sorta

dam ur good! lol

dang girl u really know how to wrie it is just like an ot there feelings poem

very powerful poem, i feel like that sumtimes, keep u the good work n if u need to talk then my email is monkies_are_the_future@hotmail.com or u can pm on here
~*lindz*~

i love your work soo much, you rock and you have such a gift. but i know that true talent comes from true feeling, from the heart, so if you need to talk to anyone.. im always here. just email me.
plasticspud@yahoo.com

Such a sad ending, nonetheless a terribly good poem 5/5.

Wow...I really liked this piece! So full of emotion's, and flowed beautifully! This was my favorite part:

"Distorted life
Vacant words
Slipping away
She's left unheard"

Keep it up~Holly