Broken Promises

by SoupErHereOh   Mar 25, 2005


From the day we met it was always
Best Friends Forever
Now we're best friends never
You promised we'd be friend through think and thin
You promised wed know each other like we were in the other's skin
It was always me and you
We were inseparable
But I don’t know. One day
I guess somebody stood in the way
You went your way
I went mine
Why did we have to say goodbye?
I miss you
Do you miss me too?
We were always the best friends
Then look what happened
Why'd it end?
We did everything together
From second grade when we shopped for toys
To not long ago when we looked at boys
We left each other
Betrayed one another
Now nothing will be the same
Why did we pretend like friendship was a game?
Never again will we be close
We lost it like those
Who don’t care?
You said you cared
I know I did
When I heard you didn’t care
My mind went blank and bare
I miss you
My one true friend
But it came to an end.

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  • 12 years ago

    by SoupErHereOh

    lol once again, thank you lol i write when im bored ^_^ i WAS gunna put the one i wrote about my moms death up.. but its um to deep for anybody to understand lol so yah lol thnx again! much love-andie

  • 12 years ago

    by SoupErHereOh

    Thanks lol its nothing sepcail though

  • 12 years ago

    by SoupErHereOh

    Thank you to the both of you.. I right now and then, but its not commaon.. i wrote this the otehr day after my best friend commited suicide soo yeah.. thank you for your opinions! I submitted annnnother oneee to.. its about love though.. It's called umm "The Lovers Pact" i dun like it as much as this so wutever thanks for your opinions

  • 12 years ago

    by Amanda

    Very good :)

  • 12 years ago

    by liar

    I really like your poem, keep writing. This is how I feel about me and my old best friend. We don't talk no more and its sad. Excellent way to write it.
    Thanks for your comment.