I really like your poem, keep writing. This is how I feel about me and my old best friend. We don't talk no more and its sad. Excellent way to write it.
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Very good :)

Thank you to the both of you.. I right now and then, but its not commaon.. i wrote this the otehr day after my best friend commited suicide soo yeah.. thank you for your opinions! I submitted annnnother oneee to.. its about love though.. It's called umm "The Lovers Pact" i dun like it as much as this so wutever thanks for your opinions

Thanks lol its nothing sepcail though

lol once again, thank you lol i write when im bored ^_^ i WAS gunna put the one i wrote about my moms death up.. but its um to deep for anybody to understand lol so yah lol thnx again! much love-andie