Beautiful poem i really loved the whole idea of it.. but with this line
*You and me we wasn't meant to be*
I think it sounds better if you say
You and me weren't meant to be.......
Just a thought but i loved it otherwise
tash
xoxox

that was really sad... really sad.. 5/5

i loved it! a 5/5

its very sad, it reminds me of my ex, *tear* its very true, and touches base with alot of feelings that many teens are going thru.

this was really sweet gd poem thanks for the comment on mine xxxxxxxxx

Whoa, Nice peom! Very deep! I totally enjoyed reading it! Keep the talent coming. I gave you a 5!-psychotic Heart

i know ecactly how u felt and have been exactly where u were before, beautiful poem...i wud give it a 6/5...lol
be strong, time heals the pain

that was a good poem, i really liked it, hope to read more of your work soon, keep up the good work!!

The pain you write about is often a pain that cuts deeper than words can everr express. I for one could have never imagined the pain of a broken heart to its fullest extent until I experienced a broken heart myself.

Good job portraying the extreme pain of a true heartbreak.

--Sher

sweet poem sad tho. feel so sorry for you but keep fighting:D

Jacs
xxx

OMG! I luvved reading this poem. It was very natural feelings if you get what i mean. :)

Very nice...I think just about everyone knows how hard a breakup can be...check out my featured poems(theres only three) if you get a chance.

realy well written piece i like the flow of this poem it really did work well....and nice use of words, title really creative and am sure many can relate to this poem.Great job! keep it up.
take care

I really like the wording in this. I was really odd for me thats a good thing, but what I was perplexed about is where you stood in it all with or with out him you spoke of alot of pain with him then you said you wanted him back why go through it all again. Maybe your views are clouded by your emotions something you should rethink as your life goes on oh well good job. Robert

unique format flowing nicely with longing passion good job

i love that poem, it has great meaning and it was well worded, and ty for the comments on mine.... i haft to say though, i am about sick of break up poems, but that one i can live with forever.... good job keep up the good work if u would like u can e-mail me some time or add me to messenger its kelloges_applejacks@yahoo.com or hotmail what ever one u would like to use.....

i love that poem, it has great meaning and it was well worded, and ty for the comments on mine.... i haft to say though, i am about sick of break up poems, but that one i can live with forever.... good job keep up the good work if u would like u can e-mail me some time or add me to messenger its kelloges_applejacks@yahoo.com or hotmail what ever one u would like to use.....

I know how it feels, but you will be loved again but it would be much much better then the last time trust me. My ex and I broke up and I didn't know if I could go on and then I met the man I'm dating now and he's touched my heart soo many ways, that I don't believe. I love him because he's done everything I could ask for.

Love
Kala

5/5 as usual xxx

Very well written, i enjoyed it! What a fantastic movie too.. i love jim carrey. I really liked this part:

"This was supposed to be our summer
This was supposed to be our year"

Normally i would have thought it would sound boring having "this was supposed.." repeated.. but in these lines it just goes so well. great flow with this poem, overall it was awesome