a very interesting poem, cupid is a tormentor is he not?

Michael, lol.....yeah, you should defently tell him, not for your sake but for his, no one deserves that treatment! put yourself in his position and your eyes will see something else,

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The Heart That Touches Yours,
Heather Michelle Craig

good poem- you should definately tell him!

u like him as more than a friend, don't you? tell him you'll be there for himand support him through it, cos otherwise if he finds out you knew all along you could both get hurt.

abbi x

Very good!

You managed to keep me interested without a certain rhytm and rhyming scheme and that is quite an achievement. I usually don't like pomes that lack that, but this one I really enjoyed.

KEep writing=)

Great poem, plz, if you could, check out my new poem "Dear Diary". Plz rate and comment it, plz, i would really appreciate it it. I want people to understand the message I am trying to get through.

Nice work.Keep writting.Jeff

aw, thats so sad! thats kinda like what the guy i like is going threw... and he doesnt know that she doesnt really like him.

very good Nida =) I like this one a lot.. I voted a 5!! keep up the good work.. Please check out my poems "Eternal Sunshine Of The Spotless Mind" and "Blood on my bathroom floor" thanks

wonderful poem nida!!

thank you for all of your comments. it means a lot to me. thanks~!!!~

5/5 i really like this one