wonderful write, i love it! this is a very extraordinary poem as all of your work are amazing master pieces! keep the brilliant poems coming...=)

very well written poem! :) Thanks for the comments

Wow, should I say thank you? What a beautiful write...As you know when its personal Im often stuck for words.
The diction is perfect along with the flow. I loved the concept of this poem!!

Your friend
Hayley

Me too Hayley!

May I ask who this exquisite piece was written for Michael? Wow your choice in words is suberb and the good intent with this poem surely made somebody out smile...just a pure and beautiful dedication - your writing seems almost effortless ...

Eirisa

Thank you, nobody ever wrote something quite like that for me before.

Your friend
Hayley

it was my honor HJ

This poem is my favorite one yet! Excellent, I loved it! Check out mine if you find time.

hummmm....I really rnjoyrd this like a good cup of coffee...I like your style...Thanks for the comments
Xox Sherrie

this is the first poem ive read of yours, and i regret never reading one before! you are such a talented writer that i dont think i can give any constructive critisicm except to keep up whatever it is your doing and ill keep reading! 5/5! stay safe, strong, and healthy!
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ps: thanks for the comment on my "I'm In My Tears" poem, it'll help a lot when i edit it!

Oh this piece is so wonderful. There is so much emotion and thought put into this piece and it really is a stunning read. The descriptions are fantastic and the tone is so unexpected for a piece with this title. Good job

Awh this is really beautiful :)