Wow...thats scary! lol but awesome writting! Keep it up!

wow umm i dont know what to really say about that one besides great job. 5/5

~!~Noelle~!~

amazing write!!

Wow, again you have captured the emotion without being in the situation, it was a dark poem indeed, well written, keep it up xxx

Amazing poem! That was really well written and it was just great! (",)

~Krissy

thanks everyone!! your comments mean so much to me
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Hey, that was quite a new and complicated slant on that topic. It works well in the poem. nice one.

This poem was so sad, I can't say I relate. You did an amazing job writing it though. Your very talented. Keep it up. xX

Excellent writing. Chilling. It had me captured to the very end. I was shocked when I found out what he did. Good job, girl!

Wow freaky but well wrote once again