another yet amazing poem with such great meaning that i always look forward to reading. wonderful writing!!

Another wonderful piece. Its so true and honest. Your choice of words amazing, very thought provoking.

I look forward to reading more!!

Your friend
Hayley

i like your poems
you know not critisizing your poetry or any thing but you should try not ryming it's just as fun and some times expressses emotion better

Very beautiful and inspiring. Thanks you for the comments.

Love,
Tiff

Wow that was a truely excellent poem, it flowed nicely, rhymed and was probably the best poem I've ever read!!!
Tash
xoxox
P.s Thanks for your comment/suggestion and i used it because it sounds better:) So THANK YOU!

Mr D Nalley

Thanks for your feedback my friend and your email - I know what your going thru I have been there myself and poems like this ring so true to people like you and myself. It was inspiring, it was a picture of a harsh yet honest reallity, but you've provided a reminder of a way out too...inspirational and powerful Michael a brilliant write just like I have come to expect from you :o)

WOW, that was so well written and well said!!! It really got me to think.... I love it, it's really beautiful!!! Definately a 5 and I would rate it 10 if I could!!!

very good poem!! I liked the whole bit....although, I disagree with "Users are always ready to use" because I USED to be a user....but I got out of all that. But anyway, the poem goes from "natural way is we have no choice" but then at the end "you have a choice to believe in god or not". Or at least, that's the message I'm getting when I read this. Job very well done. 5/5.

christa//no motiv?

You suck and your uplifting poetry is horrid. (Just joking!) The best uplifting poetry I've ever read. :)

woah very kool original stuff ..i'm liking it:)

Good job, but ummmmmm...........I don't cyber

a nice way of teaching about life
ynx for the comments

Simply written, yet very complex at the same time with a meaning behind it.
-Kate

Wow that was amazing! So very well written and with great meaning! I really like the part "abusers will always abuse" I believe that! Great poem! Could u read and comment on my newest one! Would appreciate it! Thanx!

wow that was sooooooooo good i loved every word you are soooooooo talented!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WOW! Great poem! Thanx for the comment on mine! Your a great writer....
Take care...
Haily :)