very good poem, well done

wow, thats really sad.. I think we all feel that way in our a life at one time or another
very well written adn thanks for your comments.
you are very sweet
5/5

I think this was a good poem, until the last two lines. no offence hun, but when the whole of the rest of the poem rhymes and the last two lines don't...it just doesn't particularly sound right! Get the last two lines to rhyme like the rest and you'll have yourself a great poem! x

Not really my style, but it was alright. Could use a few more lines to make it flow better. Stay strong.

interesting... sad tho... a lot of emotion put into the words. good job i enjoyed this
stay strong and take care always