i liked ur poem

I'm a cutter as well and i hope no one starts cause people that dont dont understand how hard it is to stop. very nice piece of work though please take some time to look over a few of my poems if you'd like. 5/5

Excellent poem, Joy. very well written. Organized and neat write!
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

omg i was sitting here all alone tongiht reading that poems thinkin to myself did they jus jump in to mind cuz they poem there discribes me word for word... i can really relate to this poem... no one really cares... no one can see through the fake smile awesome job really really good.

That's so sad. You did the right thing it's just to bad her parents don't take a more active part in her life. It's sad that your friendship ended when all you did was express your love and concern. Very well written! ~Brooke~

very very well written poem. It's very sad to hear that her parents are unaccepting of their daughters problem and are doing the worst thing possible and not helping her. Congrats to you for standing up.

I know how you feel and its hard :(
but this is a great poem

Great poem---good topic becuase Im sure a lot of people have to deal with the same issue-sry but i dont have any advice that no one else has already given-tough situation....but 5/5 on the poem--

Wow, that is really in depth. I know how it is to cut and when my friend figured me out she told her dad. In a way I thank her b/c I know she is there for me.

Im sorry that this happened to you, some take it harder then others.

[poem wise--- it was great, wonderful flow and it all went well together. the second to last stanza confused me and lost the flow a bit but the last stanza made up for it. Very well done.]
Juls

My adivice would be to let her go, as hard as that may be, it will be best for you, she has chosen her addiction over her friend, so dont let it hurt you anymore...you have done all you could, now she has to make the decision from there. great poem, nice rhyming, not bad!