amazing, of course...you're so amazing...all of you...i love you hunnie...you amaze me more and more each day, each time i hear from you...i love you baby boy...i hope you're okay... i love you xxxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

Oh, this one was sad. Quite alike "endless fields" but i think this one was better. It had an even better meaning than the other one.

sooo good =) 5/5 for this one!!! keep it up! hugs

Logan,
Very creative and thoughtful
piece, it was wonderfully written.
For some reason the first stanza
really stood out the most. Nice
work, 5/5

Love Always,
Heather M Craig

very nicely written.. you have a great flow. good job

wow good poem. i know how you felt. i went to belgium a couple of weeks ago and also went to the somme. i just sat there and it made me think just how many soldiers died durin both of the wars. you can't go with in a mile without seeing some sort of grave yard. we vistited the trenches of the german, south african and british and it was such a strange experiance as you are walking the same footsteps as those who lost their lives for us. any way great poem hope you rite more. loads of love xxxmelissaxxx