OMG Gurl dont ever lift that blande please dont, i love you like a sis and if u ever did that i dont know what i would do!!!!!! im serious u've always been there for me and if i have to go a day w/o u i would die if u need to talk u know im always here
Love you always,
Ashley

Thanx hun! Love ya too alwayz!

Well I thought this was really good : ) I can relate ur a good writer good job

Not a bad poem, needs to be a but longer maybe. But still, I'm loving your poems
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Not bad hon. I offton write realy bad ones. LOL.... A sugestion for you, If you are unsure of a poem put it aside for awail. Then come back and eddit it.

I put mine in one of those jurnol books and take it with me every where.
It sometimes takes me a year or more to work a poem. The poem in the end works out great.

case and point took two years to write looking for peace. Took me that long to find the right words.

Well this poem is definetly not bad, thats for sure. Another great poem, i can tell alot of emotion went into this one. I like how you put the stanzas in lines of 2 (i don't know if i said that properly) but yah, excellent.

no i think its great... so full of pain and hurt, i think it was written really well i love the words you used i cant wait to read more if thats not very good (according to your standards)
>>5/5<<
bec

hey.... i thought it was really good! check out mine if you ever have a chance!!thanks
-amanda

wow this is really nice i know how u feel there is days where u actually do take the knife and cut or think about it

I hope u r ok and you'll be ok.... Very emotional again but great to read. :)

Nicely written again... keep your head up high babe.

xoxo Tina