This is definetly one of the best prose poems i have ever read . Good job

Excellent. Theres not much more to be said.

brilliant prose style, superb!

wo i've read a few poems about nature this is by far one of the best. very descriptive and really allows the reader to picture whats happening.....a great poem!

OMG that was beautifully written! So well expressed! Please check out one of my new poems if you can - i like.... or im scared~~~~

awww thank you all for voting and commenting means so much ill ceck out ur ork. yea i know its no hyphen but it wont let me write it without! :S ill try again lol
thamks again!
xxxLoUxxx

it seemed more in the form of a story than a poem, but nonetheless good. i loved how descriptive you were. good job

very good poem. keep it up. you have got the talent~!!!!!!!!~
5/5

Thanks for your answers on my questions.. I will use it in my paper! It dosen't matter if you don't have a boyfriend.. because I want to know what every people think about love so br or gr dosen't matter at all... thanks again.. take care Lucy!!!

very powerful and paints a really clear picture, loved it! not sure how i didnt comment on this before, anyway, great write! :)

take care always, lu -x-x-x-

I'm back on this old account and it's great!!!!!! :)

Very well written! A great job! I have wrote a couple poems on nature I don't know if u had a chance to read them or not. But u really did a great job on this one! I am trying to keep up with everyones new poems! I posted a new one today! If u have time could u take a look at my 2 newest ones! Thanx always appreciated! Take Care! Brooke

Wonderful work, I couldnt have done it better my self .. I have read a lot of your poems and they were awesome and I thought I would leave you a comment telling you just how great they are and I loved this one to as well .. Lol .. And I would love for you to check out my poems, if you get the chance .. Lol .. and I almost forget Lil Luce, Lol .. I love your picture " Juicy Lucy" lol it was cute !! Well anyway Awesome Job ! .. lol thanks again !

Love Yas
May =D