Comments : Underneath My Shield

  • Aww, it’s so sad and understandable. Like the way you’ve worded it all, very well done. Love the title
    You've got a 5 from me
    (is this is true, you can always talk to me)

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    You are so damn good...keep it up...

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Fallen Angel~

    I really liked your poem. I could relate to it in every way. If you really feel this way you can e-mail me I'm here to lend a hand from one who understands. If you get a chance read some of my poems and tell me what you think. And don't forget if need someone to talk to I'm always here. Hope you had/have. A Happy New Years. =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Wow... i really liked this poem... its exactly how i feel sometimes... it was beautifully written and just amazing! nice work and kepp it up!

    sammie

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody

    Wow this is realli good...thanks for my comment!! love yaz!!
    keep strong!!!!
    xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by avery

    I can relate a lot to this poem.
    If it really is about you, you can talk to me anytime, i'm always here.

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    Very good...unique!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Katie

    And the shield feels like your one and only strength and no one will ever understand how broken you are under it. I understand what its like. But in the end It will be alright this I promise

  • 18 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    This Is A Wonderfull Poem. Full Of Emotions...I Abslutly Loved It...
    If You Need Someone To Talk To:
    glitery_girls@hotmail.com
    Just Add Me...
    Luv,
    *LuvYou2Death*

  • 17 years ago

    by 111308

    Wow! I Really Like This Poem! Lots Of Emotion,Great Flow! And I Totally Relate To Everything In This Poem! 5/5
    Love,
    Steph*xbr0k3ndr3amzzx*

  • 17 years ago

    by xFadedxForeverx

    Awsome poem, really good and true.

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Amazing, and true. Soso true. I too hide behind a fake life, still do, but the walls are slowly crumbling down..it only gets harder.

  • 17 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    EXCELLENT!!!Wow..5/5!!that was really good! I felt all the amotion and sadness like it was all inside me!!Great Write!@@

  • 17 years ago

    by holly

    I love this espically cause i can relate. this flows beautifully iespically loved "My smile is just my make-up, to hide me from this pain.My laugh just protects me, covers up where my tears stain."

  • 17 years ago

    by Jordan Smith

    I know how you feel all the way, because I am the same person. I will walk in a world, no one sees me, they see who I fake, or they see who they've made me out to be. I hide my pain so no one will laugh, or make fun of, but mostly, I know they don't understand. I think you understand though, and for how young you are, you shouldn't have to feel like this, but you write really good. If you want to email me sometime, it's vanillapassion16@yahoo.com

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    My real identity.Not somebody always cheerful, not somebody who is well, but somebody who is depressed and needs someone to tell.
    [[my real identity - not somebody..]]
    I just want somebody, to tell me it'll be alright. To look after me, and say the ends in sight.
    [[Polly, it'll be alright... The ends in sight.]]

    Otherwise, nicely written.. One of your best poems, though the formatting was in story form. But nicely written indeed.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kate

    I really like it. i can really relate to it. good job.

  • 15 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    Great poem. i really liked this one. lol. keep up the good work and keep in touch. lates. ^_^