Elements

by ..::Angel of your darkness::..   Apr 5, 2005


I am a red flame
I am the raging fire
I am a deadly touch
I am a burning desire

I am the water
I am the rain
I am a tear
I am a healer of pain

I am the green grass
I am the tree so tall
I am the flowers
I am what you cause to fall

I an the strong winds
I am the gently breeze
I am the hurricanes
I am able to bring you to your knees

I am the water and rain
I am the earth and land
I am the elements
I am what you misunderstand

I am the wind and air
I am the fire and flame
I am the breeze and ground
I am the burning and the rain

I hold so much in my hand
And give it all to you
Take me for granted
And life will be threw

Without the water how will you drink?
Without the air how will you breathe?
If you don’t look after my earth
The elements will leave

So don’t play with my fire
Don’t poison my waters
For these things you harm
Are my sons and daughters

So take care of what you’re given
Or I will take it away
These are my only orders
And to these you must obey

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  • 16 years ago

    by nd when its jus too much

    Wow i love this one its amazing how you thought of that!! gud job^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by John Mandeville

    I don't see how the same thing over and over is powerful but maybe they see something I don't. I can't stand rhyming poems either, so in that, I'm opinionated. The breathing is a little off, I found myself short of breath some lines and breathing easy in others, it threw the poems beat off.

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Wow excelent. Truth. I loved your poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by HeyItsMe

    Great Poem. I love it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    Great poem. Nice rhyming, wonderfully chosen title, great repititon... 5/5.

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