Silence of My Mind

by Eden   Apr 5, 2005


There's something staring back at me
Out on the misty waters
Forsaken roads are withered parts
Of a life not taken...and not owned.

Breathe the air of purest dusk,
See the shadows in the sky.
See the stars falling, ever so slowly
With ethereal grace, angels' flight.

Pain and substance leave the mind
Retreating from shadows closing in
You cannot see them the way I do...
Because it is not you they want.

Flying through the decadent wind,
Tears falling far below,
I cannot see the smile any more
Upon the familiar faces of their souls.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    WoW, I'm shocked I haven't read from you before, nice usage of words...you're amazingly talented my dear! It's not often I find this on here, great job!!! 5/5

    Love Heather

    ps Keep in touch! =D

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    wow...this is incredible... one of the best i've ever read. you're truly talented. can't wait to read more!!!
    Ariane
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by The Flame Within

    once again, a great poem. nice work. i think you got true talent. keep up the great work. hope your aite? Much Luv

    Nick