A dream

by cooldude900   Apr 7, 2005


As the day turns into night
i close my eyes to go to sleep
and as the darkness extends from the light
i see you in my sight
you came closer with your face glowing like 24 karat gold
you are the mystery that i wanted to unfold
you are the one in my arms i want to hold
We talked for what seemed an eternity.
You controlled my heart instantly.
When you first touched my hand I knew
I could love only you.
We were together for so long.
I thought we could never do each other wrong.
I knew in my heart this was right,
By the way you would say \'I love you\' and kiss me goodnight
then everything turned different every feeling went out of sight
i opened my eyes to find out it was just a dream
as far as real it seems
i thought i would never would wake up from such a dream

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  • 18 years ago

    by celi

    really nice poem! 5/5 defenitely!

  • 18 years ago

    by Emilia

    very good poem =) I voted a 5!!! keep up the great work!!! hugs from Emilia

  • 19 years ago

    by DarkOpex

    Its very deep. Holds emotion.

  • 19 years ago

    by Julie

    JAMES!!!!!!!!!!! Awww such a sweet poem! Great work! :) I love you work!
    Love Julie
    XOXOXOX
    Take care hunni

  • 19 years ago

    by CareBear

    HHHHHEEEEEEEYYYYYYYY!!~
    hehe, nice poem!!~
    So sweet!!! :)