Tangled With Suicide

by Drugs && Hugs   Apr 9, 2005


She sits in her room and Cries.
Only begging to tonights the night she dies.
Everyday gets harder
One more bruise to explain
She cant hide it anymore
To many cuts all over
Black, Blue and Crimson Red
God has left her on a thread
One she wants to cut
To end all the pain
Her words are written down
From this girl of only 12
She begins to slowly die
Her heart is slowing
Her breaths are less
She wants to die
But sadly rises again
In the hospital again
Stitches on her wrist
Why couldn't she still be on the floor
This girls wants to die
Wont you let her have a suicide
Weeks later she tries again
This time she is on the ground
God has took her life
So when you look for this little girl
Look high above
Hanging in a tree
Her body tangled in ropes and leaves
Her heart beat is gone
So wave one last good-bye
This little girl has died.

~*~*~ To all those who have tryed to hurt them self. To those who think life is not worth it. This is for you. I am one of them. Life dose seem a waste. I want to kill myself but something keeps me here. I know many people who would do anything to die. Please don't be another teen statistic. Prove to people they cant win. As hard as it may be.~*~*~

PLEASE VOTE AND COMMENT!! THANKS!!

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  • 14 years ago

    by AnCi

    I can feel your pain flowing through the poem. Though I think you could do better with the rhymes and the structure of the poem to make it easier to follow!

  • 16 years ago

    by Xx Grieving from the inside outxX

    Well this poem show how u are feeling and the emtions of ur pain. i loved it.

  • 18 years ago

    by .

    OMG i hope your ok....but 5/5 great poem
    thanks for the comment too

  • 18 years ago

    by DevilWithin

    Hey I like this poems it says a lot, and i know how you feel, i started to vut myself this year. an di have thought a bout suicide many times but i'm still here and yes keep srtong i like how u express ur self.......

    - Rachel-

  • 19 years ago

    by >> Beautifully Mistaken

    hey, this is a good poem and tells of a deep story as well. I think its really good that ur being so strong, and encouraging to others that things do get better, and killing yourself isnt always the answer. I used to be a cutter also and tryed to kill myself many times, but i learnt i was better than that, and its my life and no one is gonna take that away from me.. coz its all i have left. so trust me it does get better u just gotta hang in there n you will make it. ur poem was great and you have a lot of talent.. dont let that go to waste. gud luk.
    luv tanz xox

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