omg....this gave me the chills....and im bawling my freakin eyes out....this was a beautiful poem....i hope things get better for you soon.....keep on writning, this was amazing.....you have talent.....~much love~ ~more hugs~.....if you ever need to talk my yahoo sn is justaloserlikeu and my AIM sn is FakingThisLove

-brittnay- ((5/5))

hey, this is a good poem and tells of a deep story as well. I think its really good that ur being so strong, and encouraging to others that things do get better, and killing yourself isnt always the answer. I used to be a cutter also and tryed to kill myself many times, but i learnt i was better than that, and its my life and no one is gonna take that away from me.. coz its all i have left. so trust me it does get better u just gotta hang in there n you will make it. ur poem was great and you have a lot of talent.. dont let that go to waste. gud luk.
luv tanz xox

Hey I like this poems it says a lot, and i know how you feel, i started to vut myself this year. an di have thought a bout suicide many times but i'm still here and yes keep srtong i like how u express ur self.......

- Rachel-

OMG i hope your ok....but 5/5 great poem
thanks for the comment too

Well this poem show how u are feeling and the emtions of ur pain. i loved it.

I can feel your pain flowing through the poem. Though I think you could do better with the rhymes and the structure of the poem to make it easier to follow!