Comments : Love and Lacerations

  • 14 years ago

    by paperdoll

    Thankfully not a badly-written cutter poem. Seemed more like a random piece of writing than a poem, actually, but strangely i liked the story it told. Filled with hatred and spite, sorta sounds like the words just spilled out of you. Got a little melodramatic every now and then, but it left me with a little chill. Nicely done.

    -paperdoll

  • 14 years ago

    by nikki

    haha, badly-written cutter poems were how i used to write, hopefully i've grown out of that horrid phase. you're right, its just a random piece of writing. most things i write are. i just write whatever comes to mind exactly as i think it. and thankyou, it was supposed to be melodramatic.
    thanks paperdoll<3
    -nikki

  • 14 years ago

    by nikki

    uh.. its not about cutting...? therefore clearly you didn't read it so whatever. yeah its not in the traditional poetic form but poetry isn't about the way you set it out, or it shouldn't be, it should be about the words.