wow, i love the way you write. so different to my style, and yet i still love it. i love the way its so quick and each line is short and different lengths. and that it doesn't drag on like mine do. plus the emotion, i really like it. nice work.

Your words inspire a series of animations dressed in saturn rings and a starry space.
A complete extrapolation of the spiritual imagination.
This was excellent.

Your words inspire a series of animations dressed in saturn rings and a starry space.
A complete extrapolation of the spiritual imagination.
This was excellent.

Your words inspire a series of animations dressed in saturn rings and a starry space.
A complete extrapolation of the spiritual imagination.
This was excellent.

I was overzealous and imaptieent when it didn't accept my post after one click *blushes*.

i thought i was talented, but it is good to read writing like yours to humble myself again. you are a great writer, and you are definately one of the best ive read on this site. this poem was... outstanding...

5/5, 20 times over.

a very chilling poem, especially the last line, but i also love the phrase 'parasitic obsession with the source of separation.' and thanks for your nice note.

peace love & hippies.