Comments : Air Goddess

  • 18 years ago

    by pinkalias

    My gosh...gorgous.

    Your imagery: flawless
    Every line was this set picture of utter beauty and excellent symbolsim.
    The title in itself is a beautifully grasped metaphor of nature and environment.
    My favorite lines: "Wisp of chilling air on my lips
    Sealed with an array of one peppermint kiss.

    She is the Goddess, euphoric, in the clouds
    The shape surrounding aqueous rain drops."

    This had such a lovely, peaceful atmosphere to it. Excellent job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Amazing Imagery, the first 3 couplets are flawless, and the follow up of the poem is beautiful. I applaud your talent greatly. 5/5

    Love Always,
    Heather M Craig

  • 18 years ago

    by Cut~Up~Angel

    Amazing. i loved the imagery in this poem it paints the picture sooo well and just shows total beauty. Good job 5/5
    Kate x~x~x

  • 18 years ago

    by miss scooby

    OMG k, I am going to be brutually honest lmao...this is the best poem i have read EVER in this catagory...Your use of words and imagery was like a picture book in my head...amazingly written..loves it
    take care always 5/5

    ♥(v)Χ§.§ÇÕÕ(3¥¹º¹ ♥

  • 18 years ago

    by Sean

    You have amazing use of a vocabulary, unmatched by anybody of your age i have seen on this site.

    It's beautiful, and a delicate poem...good flow :) well done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Mel

    You have a keen imagination. keep em coming.

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    That was amazing. 5/5 nice work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Amazing in all aspects, a wonderfully exquisite image filled poem, bravo!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Niice poem.

    Lissa

  • 17 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    Utterly, indescribably brilliant. As always. And yet again, words fail me. I see no way to better praise your talent as it far surpasses anything my little mind could ever comprehend.
    Wishing I had a morsel of your talent,
    keep rockin!
    Peace, love and empathy.