Comments : I Wanted Everything

  • 18 years ago

    by shannon

    awww.. i love this poem. i gave you a 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Amit

    Excellent write, very well done.
    5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

  • 18 years ago

    by AntiSocial16

    this is so short but has such a powerful meaning! i think anything less than a 5/5 would be an insult to the poem and your talent! keep up the great work! and stay safe strong and healthy!
    AntiSocial16
    5/5
    ps: thatnks for the comment on my "Beat Me" poem. i appreciated it very much!

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Good job, it was short but to the point, loved it 5/5

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 18 years ago

    by deedee

    it is short but it means alot in a little bit of words keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    Yes, I agree with all the other ppl the meaning of this poem is very strong but it's also very original. Wow, I liked it. Keep on writing, 5/5 for this poem!
    Satuxxa =)
    p.s thanks for your comment!!

  • 18 years ago

    by David Paul

    Its a good poem but it sounds like its kind of forced. Like you were trying to make yourself write. If thats what you want than go ahead and keep on but your others are better than this. Keep it real.

  • 18 years ago

    by Gemmie Lou

    well done xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    I'm back on this old account and it's great!!!!!! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Hey usually i'd say make it longer but i loved this one it was amazing.... It reminds me of how i'm feeling right now. Short and beautiful, don't change it:) 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by CutMyArmToPieces

    its good i didn't give it a five tho cuz it was kinda short but w.e keep up the good writting^_^

  • short and sweet well written but to me well um add on to it make it more then a 6 line poem it could be really excellent if you add more of that spark this short poem has. its great but add more (my opinion)

  • 18 years ago

    by themeuneverseen

    Short, sweet, and to the point! Very sweet but also very powerful in just a few lines! Keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by hussain

    short poem that means a lot. Just a few words that have so much meaning to them.Somthing am sure amny can relate to. enjoyed this one Love it. Take care.

  • 18 years ago

    by No Motiv?

    good poem....very short, but sweet, and to the point =)

  • 18 years ago

    by VampyraKi†

    A little short but you got the point across i think. nice job keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by SatinRisse

    Oh how true!!

    I liked this one as well...it was short but to the point. Gret job again!

  • 18 years ago

    by --SlIpPin_AwAy--

    Wow, so short, but i came close to tears. Its amazing how that can happen. Absolutely beautiful! Great job.
    xox

  • 18 years ago

    by metuka

    So true! So short but with meaning!
    Very cute!

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel E F Allen

    Simplistic but effective xx