Wow! This poem was definatley one of a kind..for one I have never read any poem about marriage and two I have never read one written so well! This poem was describing the perfect marriage and I wish everyones could be that way! What a wonderful poem you have written! Keep up the great Job please! 5/5
this poem flowed beautifully, from beginning to end. it captivated me and wanted me to keep reading. beautiful poem. you have an amazing talent. keep up the great work. stay safe, strong, and healthy!
This is a beautiful poem an abstouely beautiful poem! Love it Amit Touched my heart! That's how love is supposed to be! I hope at the end that I am as happy as my parents they have been married almost 27 years and they still act like they are newly weds! But another great poem Keep it up and I'll keep reading your poems!