Excellent write, very well done!
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

i thought it was really good!! it seemed so real.....(sorry but what i just said sounds wierd lol)but any ways i gave you a 5/5
-amanda

it somewhat is real but at the same time not! My boyfriend and I have been together for over a year and he just moved to Florida! And so its a poem to him! Thank you!

Thats so sad and sweet at the same time! Great emotion! Take Care! Brooke

nice freeverse flow good job

Ok I am terrible on rating but I gave it a 4. Now you ask way if it were a short story it would be a five, as a poem it lacked flow and seemed to be choppy.
But that just my feeling you had alot of good description and you painted a picture in my mind that was great but it just read too much like a story.

descriptive and delicate - i don't believe that poetry has to be about rhythm and for me this poem reinforced my belief xx

This is really good and you put a lot of emotion but it seams you repeated cold and pale twice or something like that maybe you should change one of them so each thought is unique ... but besides that i gave you a 5/5 for it is really good with lots of emotion

Aww thats really sweet. I can tell a lot of emotion went into it. Some words were repeated, but it was still great.
Nice job :)
xox

AWWW.
iT`S S0 G00D. 5/5 DEFF.
iT MAKES ME THiNK 0F MY BF THAT M0VED TO iNDiANA. WE BEEN T0GETHER F0R ALM0ST 2 YRS.

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