You

by Amanda   Apr 14, 2005


You gave away my sadness and locked it in a box,
made sure it wasn't free, secured it tight with locks,
You tore away the fears and pushed them right away,
smothered me in cuddles so that they wouldn't stay,

You gave me lots of hope and a life to live,
taught me that i have so much more to give,
Gave me lots of love, showed me that you care,
told me to remember for me you will be there,

Gave me alot of courage to do things that i enjoy,
told me not to let bullies use me, cos i am not a toy,
You are very important, you fill my life with the best,
I will always love you, alot more than all the rest,

You have a special place, It's deep within my heart,
we are closer than close, even though we're far apart,
two hearts joined into one, we're together at the hip,
I will never leave you cos I'd be like a sinking ship.

Copyright 2005 - Amanda Linzi

LOVE YA GIRL!!!!
For my best friend Jade. She's the best! Please comment.
Tell me if i need to alter it! Thanks :)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Gave me lots of love, showed me that you care,
    told me to remember, for me you will be there,

    my favorite lines

  • 18 years ago

    by Bredada

    is a good poem u seem like a very thankfull person

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    I loved this poem!!! It was so sweet. You and your friend are so blessed to have eachother. Great work!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Exquisite_Emily

    Awesome! Great ryming, and rythem! cool.

  • 18 years ago

    by Richard

    kinda sad very good written n words used correctly