It was a long poem but it was very good. You have much talent and great potential. The whole old English twist on it made it kind of errie. Awesome poem, keep 'em coming!

My Goodness. That was long, but amazing. I loved it. Keep writing, I would like to read more of your poems.

That was longer than my life

This is awesome...! Very good Keep going! It's only too long but it's still amazing.

i don't mind a long poem. :)

You have a marvelous gift. Your use of language is beautiful.

xxx

Wow ok i like it it
it good
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Long poem, but equally aweosome.

-Flaming

I could only hope to one day be half the poet you are now. =)

Wow this was so friggin awsome..
i loved it..
tottaly 5/5.
great job..

I really admire your work. Keep it up, it's really brillant. I find it utterly fascinating.

It was really long, but it kept me interested which is always great.....5/5...thanks for the comment and Ill keep that change in mind..haha...comment back?!

Hey also i was wondering if you could comment my two new poems...thanks!!