oh my god...that's beautiful. really. thats like...exactly how i feel. i love it. i really do. hmm...for a title...what about 'What If...?' keep writing...this poem alone shows that you have massive amounts of talent. i loved reading this...peace.
everyone's saying the same thing...but no offense those titles seem boring...you should do something a little more unique...like "If we're not meant to be" but i get what you're saying in the poem...i mean I know that feeling...of not being able to move on...like the one who has my heart...wow...im like stuck in his heart...and I can't get out...and he's locked in mine...but we're not together...love's a crazy thing...
Yea gud poem, i gave it 5 but i think 'How is it then' and 'What If' are WAY too original i think maybe you should call it 'A Feelings That Doesn't Die' OR ' Are We Meant To Be Apart' because both titles reflect the way you're feeling in this poem. xxx