Comments : Passing Chance

  • 13 years ago

    by ~Da1NOnliiNaNa~

    This poem is very nice....
    I guess a good title would be What if
    cause u have alot of lines with What if.
    Nice job on ur poem!
    NaNa

  • 13 years ago

    by Valerie Woodhall

    I really enjoyed ur poem....i think a good title for it would be "How Is It and What If"

  • 13 years ago

    by Amy

    WOW!! That's a GREAT poem!! Definitely one of my FAVORITES!! I agree totally with Brittany! You're SUCH an inspiration!!

    I think a good title would be "What If.." or "How Is It"..hmm, can't think of anything else. hehe. Sorry I can't be of more help!

    Great job again!!!!! :D

    ~Amy~

  • 13 years ago

    by Mariah

    That is a very good poem. I couldn't think of a name though, if I do think of a name I'll tell u somehow. GREAT POEM

  • 13 years ago

    by Annie

    oh my god...that's beautiful. really. thats like...exactly how i feel. i love it. i really do. hmm...for a title...what about 'What If...?' keep writing...this poem alone shows that you have massive amounts of talent. i loved reading this...peace.
    -annie

  • 13 years ago

    by Angie

    What If & How Is It? would be a great title. Beautiful poem, great job, loved it.

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 13 years ago

    by lindsey

    aww that was beautiful..I loved it..It was excellent..your a good writer..keep writing..5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by xUnbreakablex

    wow u have some serious talent i loved it! 5/5 and i loved the idea and the structure of it keep it up x x x x x

  • 13 years ago

    by xUnbreakablex

    oooo yeah n a title could be what if x x x

  • 13 years ago

    by Christina Gomes

    everyone's saying the same thing...but no offense those titles seem boring...you should do something a little more unique...like "If we're not meant to be" but i get what you're saying in the poem...i mean I know that feeling...of not being able to move on...like the one who has my heart...wow...im like stuck in his heart...and I can't get out...and he's locked in mine...but we're not together...love's a crazy thing...

    great poem tho

    <3
    Christina

  • 13 years ago

    by Cassandra

    im just in awe of your poem i really think a good title could be... "this could b our last chance"

  • 13 years ago

    by Dannie

    Aww!!That's so sweet!!Ur a true romantic!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Ashley

    i agree with everyone else it should be named "What If" it is really a good poem. Love, Ashley

  • 13 years ago

    by butterfly ♥ kisses

    Wow this poem is so great! You're a very talented writer. For a title you could try "How Can It Be?" Check out my poems if you get the chance thanks :)

    ~Kayla

  • 13 years ago

    by ~!*BaByGuRl*!~

    hey i read ur peom u should put the name as cant live with out you

  • 13 years ago

    by Cierra

    What if

  • I love your poem...your well talented...well keep up all the good work
    luv sam
    xxx

  • 13 years ago

    by xxamberxx

    Yea gud poem, i gave it 5 but i think 'How is it then' and 'What If' are WAY too original i think maybe you should call it 'A Feelings That Doesn't Die' OR ' Are We Meant To Be Apart' because both titles reflect the way you're feeling in this poem. xxx

  • 13 years ago

    by xxamberxx

    Feeling*.......thought I would correct my little mistake lol xxx

  • 13 years ago

    by *Guerita*

    wow... i loved it is slows so good and i understand is so well keep it up