Start To Stop

by Robert   Apr 17, 2005


White knuckles embrace the wheel of control,
I punch the gas to making the engine take it’s toll.
Faster and faster the wheels spin in constant motion,
As the oil rubs metal lubricating it like lotion.
My gloves hold tight and my eyes watch the road ahead,
One false move at 260 miles it is I that will lie down dead.
Still I do this race after race to try and regain that cash prize,
And I know I will do this until the road see me to my demise.
It is a thrill, a lust, and a passion that will never fade,
Riding hard on the black top mile after mile making the grade.
I have no family of flesh or bone,
For when I die in this car I know my life to be alone.
So I push hard until the checker flag is finally mine,
And that night after all has said their peace I will celebrate with wine.
No woman, no man just the a metal machine that gets me from start to stop,
An on going road with no drop.
This is my life and I wanted it just for me,
For this is the only thing that will set my spirit free.

Written By
Robert Lee Niswander
Copyright 2005

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  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Great, i thought this was going to be a 'luvin dis laa' type lol but it was really well structured. xxx alex xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Oh how I love the imagery in this...simply breathtaking.

    I found this to be very well written, and a delightful read.

    The flow is near perfect throughout the piece, coupled with the content and wording, everything comes together to create a truly beautiful read.

  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    This one had amazing imagrary! wow! the rhyming again seem forced and i didn't like the structure of it.. maybe pick a different title? but overall very good poem!!! :o]

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This poem holds greatly described excitement, it held my attention from the first line. Very original piece, very descriptive and powerful.
    You expressed all emotions and thoughts here excellently.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashley Ann

    Such imagery! You are an awesome poet! A lot of poems will bore me, but your poems capture my attention all the way through.. from start to stop. lol.. Fantabulous! 5/5