wat an awesome poem honey really sad but i understand be strong and remember tomorrows a brand new day luv u lots

sooo good.. i can really relate..5/5

take care,
much love,
shannon

great poem i can tell you seached
i know this is kinda redundent but
i can tell you seached you soul
and you truly expressed youself
no dout this is a 5/5
keep up the great work

Nice, full of sadness,that was just abvious : ) .I think we all do use some masks somehow somewhere.

this part was touching though:
You didn't notice my tear filled eyes
You couldn't see through my lies
You never heard my silent yells

much Respect,
Rua Francis.

by the way, i like your nickname,it captured me,i feel am hunted by memories too : (

hey, this was amazing. I love your poems. you're a great poet.
much love,
marjan