Through the Looking Glass & 7 Years Bad Luck

by Samantha   Apr 19, 2005


Brilliance in a shard of glass
Looking through, I see the last
Hope I have, a distorted view
Of the man I love, I see you

May the sun shine brighter
Every day
May happiness be more than something
I say
May we never have to
Go away

Sun-streaked philosophies
And unique possibilities
Bring each day to the new
Each day I wake up to you

May the wind blow lighter
Every day
May you hear happiness in everything
I say
May this moment never
Go away

Petrified teardrops before they start
From my eyes, no reason to part
Because of this love, so true
This love that I've found with you

May the sun shine brighter,
The wind blow lighter,
May the sky stay ever blue.
May happiness be more than an ideal,
Know that my words are real,
May you find this all to be true.
May our treasured memories keep strong
May our footsteps never take us wrong
May I stay, forever, next to you.

© Likuid Pain
aka Samantha Tulgetske

~By the way, this is for Ty.~

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  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Aww...how sweet! I loved this...it was just..wow. No words to explain...5/5 definately.

    DarkSuicide

  • 18 years ago

    by creasy

    wow! that was beautifully written! i loved it! awesome job! keep it up and take care. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by ---AL---

    Wow, i read a few of your poems and I came to one conclusion...You're a really good writter, allthough most of them almost follow the same kind of rhythm or format they are still very unique each capturing their own mystique of emotion. Very good job on all your poems, i really like how you write, and i look foward to reading more of your poems and i have added you to my favorites.

    PS: on another note, thank you for the HONEST comments on my poems, i took your advice and i am in the process of re-working them and fixing them, thank you again for the honest comment, and the pointers.

    Alain

  • 18 years ago

    by ...:NiKi:...

    That is soooo good! i love the depth of the meaning behind it, i can say that ive felt that way before, and u capture every aspect of it! great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Beautiful poem. I liked the way you didn't keep the rhyme scheme the same....not sure if that was purposely done or not but it definitely worked! This poem is filled with love and emotion and it can surely be heard through out. I didn’t lose interest at all. Beautifully written! I really enjoyed this! 5/5 :)

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