AWESUM POEM I LUVED IT!!!!!!!!!!

Great job hun! I really liked it! And it flowed really good!:)
Love ya alwayz....
Haily
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Good poem. Meaningful and truthful words. Keep it up xxx

This is kind of like the whole, "walk a mile in their shoes" type thing but a hundred times better. It's so true that you should try to understand why people do what they do, but you never really will unless you are in the same position one day. This is an amazing poem..keep it up

i know exactly the kind of emotions there, both from my own experience and watching friends go thru it, i loved the poem, its so strong. a definite 5
trevor--

hey thanks guy i appreciate ur supports love all ya
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great poem very emotional and well written >>5/5<<
bec xXx

hi

good poem i like it alot!!!

I mixed up the "theirs" a lot...(they're, their, there)...But that's just a minor thing. FYI Their:ownership They're:they are There:place/point of existence

Otherwise it's a well thought out poem and very emotional.

Brilliant poem. only 2 points...

these two lines appear to contain typos:

"to see in in a point of view"
and
"going threw their mind"

other than that a brilliant peice.