Comments : The Kiss

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenny Sys

    What a sweet poem, that was so lovely. Keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by hOlly

    that was nice matthew. keep writing=) -hOlly

  • 18 years ago

    by selina

    aww i realy enjoyed readin that poem u av talent keep up the gud work matthew!!

  • 18 years ago

    by hidden under lies

    this one is touching. it makes me remember my first kiss lol on the playground when i was 8. but it was nothing compared to this lol. read and vote and comment on my poems please. thanks oh by the way thanks for checking out my poem. your on my favorites list you dont have to add me on their becuz most of my poems are depressing but if you want to thats fine

  • 18 years ago

    by christina

    grt peom loved it :)
    always smile
    peaceeee

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    I don't know what more to say! Your poems are amazing! That was beautiful! I look forward to reading more of your work soon! Brooke

  • 18 years ago

    by Nanita

    that was really good hun
    keep writin
    *plz comment on mine

  • 18 years ago

    by kt

    cute cute .. i loved it !! xOo kt

  • 18 years ago

    by Courtney Lynn

    I like it alot... Good poem!!

  • 18 years ago

    by *YaSmIn*

    another sweet one lol....man wut i'd do for u to be here.......*sighs*....
    ~*~yasmin~*~

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Awwwww, to feel like this again! This poem really takes me back, thank you for sharing it! I loved this couplet:

    "My lips meet yours in a passionate kiss;
    Its champagne, fireworks, and heavenly bliss"

    Mesmerizing piece~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by Seductive

    i read all of ur poems , i dont know how many times 2 say it but ur a great writer. i like em, let me know when u add new 1's.

  • whoever this girl is your talking about in your love poems should know that she is a very very lucky girl to have someone so passionate to love. good luck with your writing. you're doing awesome for someone who doesn't write that often.

  • 18 years ago

    by Hard2Heal

    Very very good

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*angel_tears~*

    Wow matthew all your poems are very nice i loved every single one of them!!!your a great poet!!=)

  • 16 years ago

    by For The Heart I Once Had

    You have awesome talent...keep up the great work!!!

    MemberOfTheBlackParade x

  • 16 years ago

    by Abena

    Your poem is really descrpitive and the emotions captured are really good. plz comment on my wrk. bye x

  • 16 years ago

    by lina

    Omg this poem is beautiful and was so touching. i can't believe someone could write something this beautiful, amazing, and awesome and loveing. Thxs for insiering me. That poem opened my mind and heart and soul.

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow, i loved it, it was awesome. i added you to my fave's, hope you dont mind, maybe if you have enough time you could vote and comment on some of my poems. but i gave you a 5 for the kiss. it was so deep. great writing.

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    This is really beautiful, well written. 5/5, Em