Voodoo Doll

by Robert   Apr 22, 2005


Squeeze me with your hand
i was once a friend
throw me at your wall
I'm now a voodoo doll

slit my wrists with a knife
try to take off my life
but i can't scream or call
cos I'm a voodoo doll

you don't have time for me
but you're not gonna set me free
on the floor you make me fall
I'm just a voodoo doll

now you've had enough
cos you've been too tough
so you wrap me in a pall
and hide your voodoo doll

you lock me in a drawer
i won't see light anymore
I'm already hearing death call
now I'm a spirit not a voodoo doll

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  • 12 years ago

    by blackrose1011

    Weird, I've heard of rag doll, but voodoo doll? thats unique. The ryhme is typical, and the two ideas has a form function thing...you know? anyways, It is a little creepy, but good. I enjoyed reading it. I can tell you put time into your poem.

  • 13 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    wow is that a song.....its really enjoying to read well done :) unique is right

  • 13 years ago

    by Robyn Park

    I really liked the poem, until the very end. The ending just seemed a little bit rushed to me. Sort of like you didn't know where else to go, so you decided to finish it. But, other than the ending, the rest of the poem was excellent. Very unique way of explaining things, and setting the atmosphere. Nicely done.

  • 13 years ago

    by girly†

    wow that a really good poem

  • 13 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    Excellent poem! I really liked it! I sometimes feel da same way! ♥