Comments : The Killer

  • 12 years ago

    by No Motiv?

    Great poem....kinda schizo like. Anyway, "lead" should be "led" in "He’s lead me on this chase". I've always been a fan of your poems, this one is no different.

  • 12 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Wow...great poem! I loved the intensity and the twist at the end! Definitely 5/5~Holly

  • 12 years ago

    by anagha

    i luv it!!! grt suspense....
    anagha

  • 12 years ago

    by Kirsten Fromer

    odd but good plz check out mine it would mean lots thanx !~!*!KIRSTEN!*!~!

  • Now can I ask what crime have you comitted?The answer is up to you.

  • 12 years ago

    by K1n9d0m

    great twist made me think a i give it a 5/5 great job!!!!
    relistik

  • 12 years ago

    by Ashlynn

    Wow awsome poem.. i love it
    Check me out
    ~~(~~Morana~~)~~

  • 12 years ago

    by Trisha

    Dude- i love this poem- totally. Its way good. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Amit

    Well done with this one too!

    5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

    Nidhi's Love, Amit.

  • 12 years ago

    by Danielle

    Awesome.

  • 12 years ago

    by Da_scurry_kitty8me

    wow, that was awesome. i love how you go into detail like that. i wish one day i could be like you. your poems just fit together with every word. i think its really cool.

  • 12 years ago

    by Da_scurry_kitty8me

    hay check out my poems if you get a chance. tell me what you think of mine.

    Kikibird

  • 12 years ago

    by Da_scurry_kitty8me

    hay dont type in kikibird type in

    Darkness in the poem search bar

  • 10 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Now that waws rather thought provoking and uniquely shocking. nice poem.

  • 10 years ago

    by sOmEbOdYsNoBoDy

    Good job it had an interesting twist and made me want to keep reading it

  • 10 years ago

    by Annissha

    5/5 wow thiz poem waz really deep and shocking....thiz iz the bezt poem i read 2day....u did really good and kept the flow.....i hope u keep writing cuz u are really good at what u do

    much luv
    peachez

  • 10 years ago

    by Elyse

    Wow great poem just a little on the creepy side but i didnt wanna stop reading it

  • 10 years ago

    by Matt Boxx

    This poem is simply amazing. You have talent. I'm going to read more of your work. Keep writing 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Chimaen

    OMG...*still taking in breath... TOTALLY UNEXPECTED!!! I did not see that coming!!!

    i have to say that you've inspired me... i won't copy you, but your poem has placed me on the right track for my own... GREAT WORK, i'll look for it in a book...
    Chimaen

  • 10 years ago

    by Roxy

    The end really shocked me since I wanted to know who the killer was then you said it was you and I was like wow!!
    Great description and a very deep poem. Keep it up
    xx Roxy