Comments : The Love of a Brother

  • 12 years ago

    by katie!

    What a lovely poem, It doesnt matter whether or not they are a blood relation, she is very lucky to have you, keep writing and take care xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Great poem! I know how it is to love someone like a sibling, when they aren't really related to you. (See my poems "My Brother" and "An Arm Around My Shoulder" for more details.) But anyway, great job. 5/5
    -Kate

  • 12 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Excellent poem, This shows you have a truly loving heart. We can love people like family even if the blood is not there. Bless you, great job, hugs, love, *Ann*

  • 12 years ago

    by **Stary_nights**

    aww..this was very good:)...i really loveed it..and i'm so sorry that you two never get to talk anymore because you're so busy....that really sucks a lot...hang in there, someday you'll talk like you used ot!! i promise~ great job as always 5/5~
    take care, love ya~
    *Brittany*

  • 12 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    Omg that was such a great poem! Keep up the great work! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Aww, very well written Amit! I'm sorry you don't get to talk to her as much anymore, you should def. send her the poem perhaps....I pray you the best of luck! 5/5

    Love Always,
    Heather

    ps. Lost love? --no hun, the poem was just a thought, I'm still with Shaun, but I don't know, it feels like things are slipping away if that makes sense.

    ---------God Bless----------love ya!

  • 12 years ago

    by Angie

    Oh Amit, you do have a beautiful heart. She is very lucky to have you as a brother (whether blood related or not). This is a very beautiful way to tell her how much you love, appreciate and care about her. Wonderful job. 5/5

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 12 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Amit, this is a very lovely and beautiful poem...so sweet!!! This is just how I feel about my brother and from the beginning to the end, I thought about him....so thank you for sharing with all of us who reads this!!! Glad you met this girl, your sister!!!

    *Love Sabrina*

  • 12 years ago

    by Nobia

    easily the best poem i have ever read. excellent write bro..shows ur emotions in each line... straight 5
    take care
    XOXOXXOO

  • 12 years ago

    by Emily

    I know exactly what you are saying. It's definetly a 5/5. I have a friend that is like a sister to me too... check out my poem Letting You Go. it really hurts to let them go or not talk to them for a long time. But anyways, good job and keep up the good work!

  • 12 years ago

    by Heather M Craig


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    My goodness, Amit, 21 votes of straight 5 ... woo, hunz, you sure are loved =) email me soon!

    Love
    Heather

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Wow!! I know exactly how you feel..I share that same feeling...I know it hurts...This poem was wonderfully described! You showed your emotions really well...I wish the two of you luck and jhope you are soon able to talk....5/5
    Kind Regards,
    ~Chelsey~

  • 12 years ago

    by Nanita

    awww how sweet, that is what i really call a real brother/sister relationship. i hope that yall keep in contact,
    *hugs*

    _me

  • 12 years ago

    by stephalee

    you are a very good writer!!!!!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Libby M

    This was just too beautiful... Having a real or just a close someone who you consider as a sister---its the best feeling in the world. Excellent Write.

    Libby

  • 12 years ago

    by Trevor

    wow i loved this poem, i know exactly what you mean. i have no real sister either but i met this girl a year or so ago and we developed this bro-sis relationship and i would happily do anythign for her. and i havent talked to her so much recently and i am trying to make sure i dont lose her. stay strong mate
    trevor--

  • 12 years ago

    by [She.Falls.Asleep]

    That's lovely. Both things. 1. the poem is great. 2. How you got such a great sister even if there is no blood relation.

    The poem is great. it shows how you feel and I'm sure she loved it to bits!!

    Take care, I'll check out your other work soon... Elle x

  • 12 years ago

    by Amit

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  • 12 years ago

    by SammiBABY

    aww thats lovely! great work
    take care
    Sammi xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    This is such a sweet poem:) I loved it as usual your talent shows through your poems. Keep it up:)