Comments : I'm sorry...

  • 12 years ago

    by Robert

    this was a nice poem too but it lacked the whole over view of what you were sorry about it just gave me half the story. Tell me everything or just don't tell me anything. sorry thats the way I feel and your readers will feel the same...

  • 12 years ago

    by Richard

    i liked the other u made better the move on one this one is ok tho

  • 12 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    WOW! Im amazed.. really wonderful! can relate to it... 5.0... thanx for commenting on mine... check out some more:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Deathcanwait

    hey, GREAT poem!!! :) its so good. wow!!

    Matt

  • 12 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    That's so sad..nice write. >3jess

  • 12 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    Once again, work on the flow. Something that could help would be putting the same amount of syllables into each line. I liked the idea in this one tool =) Keep writing,
    Satuxxa

  • 12 years ago

    by Robert

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    I like this one a lot. I can relate to it. Great job, keep this up!!

    Love much,
    Tiff

  • 12 years ago

    by Shadows Collide

    nice poem

  • 12 years ago

    by Corrie

    man o man, another good one! *KISSES*~Corrie

  • 12 years ago

    by Nici

    Not much to say about this poem, other than to agree with previous comments and say that it is very well written.

    Keep Writing
    Nici

  • 12 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Another very well written poem. Somehow I feel your writes get more interesting with every read.

  • 12 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    Great poem!! 5/5 definately!!! great job and keep up the AWESOME work!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Well written, I liked the subtle way you said things underlying to the whole.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lyla

    That was a very well written poem! 5/5 great job!

  • 12 years ago

    by Marjan

    this is wonderful. 5/5
    love, Marjan

  • 12 years ago

    by Rolo

    I can relate to this. Most likely in a different way, but it's still good. Nice job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Marjan

    christina, This is so wonderful. I loved it. keep it up. lots of love, Marjan

  • 12 years ago

    by Synyster

    ***huggs*** don't be sad! ^_~

  • 12 years ago

    by gasping for air

    pretty good.. it could use a little work... elaborate some more.. put some more emotion into it... you've got the makings for a really excellent poet though! keep it up!
    much love
    Amanda