Nice poem but damn your cocky haha

Ha-ha awsome.. you alwyas write excellent poems. keep on writting i loved this sexual, erotic poems or however you would call them, Your poems are the best I have read so far .

*sighs* why can't I have boys like that in Australia! That was amazing and got me wet. Well done =)

Lol this is really good. I just had to smile at the ending. Wonderful as always. 5/5, Em

Wow i really loved this how you made it a series and it all played out and fit perfectly. Yes i admit it made me wet lol we need guys like you down here. But i loved it why dont you write more?