Comments : Holding On To What Is Gone

  • 18 years ago

    by Toni

    Brilliant poem hun...i loved it, i have tears in my eyes after reading this..you have so much talent xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by pinkalias

    I really admired this. A worthy write of letting go and the pain with it. I love how you displayed the process of ridding yourself of someone you love, but yet mistreated you at the same time. I really likedI've tried to walk beside you
    Through thick, thin, black, gray
    these lines,"
    They portray the devotion and emotion given to that person only to have it neglected in return.
    I loved the last two lines
    "You and I won't make it through
    What's inevitable can't be denied."
    Symbolizing the process of letting go of a painful event and the reasoning of why it is done, in a beautiful way.
    Well done.

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