The thrill of revenge!

by chloe   Apr 28, 2005


In this dirty old courtroom I now stand
watching my future being decided
Watching my freedom slip through my fingers
Im not evil, just misguided
I regret my actions in some ways
But I cant take it when men lie
He lied when he said he loved me
So that was it, he had to die!
It all started back in the day
When I believed in true love and devotion
But when he ended that with his dirty acts
I started feeling a new emotion
it was not sadness and it was not anger
It was a deep feeling of aggression and hate
How dare he treat me in this way
Death was now his fate
I could not leave it, i needed revenge
On this man who shattered my dreams
I caught him in bed with that ugly s.lut
He said, "its not like it seems"
I stared at him, my stomach churned
I didnt give him time to explain
I never thought it was possible
Of causing another so much pain
I went to the bathroom and picked up some scissors
On my return he looked like a wreck
He apologized, begging for forgiveness
But I forced them into his neck
From this act of evil came a sudden thrill
like I had never felt before
the satisfaction of revenge
I smiled as his body hit the floor

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  • 18 years ago

    by ♥CRIMSONxX♥

    Hey Chloe..:D great poem hun, i hope it isnt true lol..although i doubt it is, you seem 2 nice to do anything like that ^_^ xoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by Amit

    Nicely written, very well done.

    5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

    Nidhi's Love, Amit.

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    WOW, that was an excellent poem. Very well written too. I liked it! 5/5

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Way to go! I know the feeling I wish it was that easy! LOL We wouldn't have to many guys left in this world! Take Care~! Brooke

  • 18 years ago

    by shannon

    5/5..very very good. keep it up.. i liked it!

    Shannon<33